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CampNano August Plotting

Post  Fircoal on Sun Jul 15, 2012 11:19 pm

Setting:

Stocke City. Has about 750,000 people (need to check other laptop for stats but I'm lazy.)



Characters:

MC: Bunny Girl -
Best Friend:


Cat Girl
Dog Girl
Fox Girl
Mouse Girl


Plot:
Hidden in the town of Stocke there lies a something that is able to give the user the ability to wish for anything they want and have it come true. However this object and is only useable by animal humans and with the lack of them, the legend as gone on to be a myth. But after looking through a history book, the bunny girl is interested in finding the object so she can wish herself into a better life.

Potential NAmes:
Bay
Chestnut
Greenwich
Powell
Gough




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Re: CampNano August Plotting

Post  Fircoal on Mon Jul 16, 2012 10:48 pm

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[9:18 PM] froyo: to explain?
[9:18 PM] froyo: Or are they just there?
[9:18 PM] firbunny: they're uncommon but unknown
[9:18 PM] firbunny: at least that's what I'm leaning towards
[9:18 PM] dawnwings: It reminds me of an anime I cna't remember the name of
[9:18 PM] firbunny: it'll be kinda like
[9:18 PM] firbunny: oh hey
[9:18 PM] firbunny: they're there
[9:18 PM] firbunny: it's odd
[9:18 PM] firbunny: but they don't wanna kill us
[9:18 PM] firbunny: so it's all cool
[9:19 PM] froyo: Okay, so right off the bat you have them dealing with being singled out
[9:19 PM] froyo: Based on their appearance
[9:19 PM] firbunny: yea just thoguht about that
[9:19 PM] froyo: So that'll be something you can work with
[9:19 PM] dawnwings: Um, how would they be unknown? Surely you're born like that, right/
[9:19 PM] froyo: Some people will treat them like celebrities
[9:19 PM] froyo: Some might hate them
[9:19 PM] firbunny: oops
[9:19 PM] firbunny: I mean but NOT unknown
[9:19 PM] firbunny: like everyone knows about them
[9:19 PM] dawnwings: Ah
[9:19 PM] froyo: Oh oh okay
[9:19 PM] froyo: They just aren't seen much?
[9:19 PM] firbunny: they're a part of socieity
[9:20 PM] firbunny: yea
[9:20 PM] firbunny: it'll proabbly be like how other races are treated in the present day
[9:20 PM] dawnwings: So they're a minority group
[9:20 PM] froyo: Okay, so it'll be less of a thing in that case since they're known about
[9:20 PM] firbunny: most are cool with them
[9:20 PM] firbunny: but some are probably still you know
[9:20 PM] froyo: But yeah people will still be a bit weird around them because they're a minority
[9:21 PM] froyo: Okay given that they aren't in particularly like, supernatural or anything like that just
[9:21 PM] froyo: by their existence
[9:21 PM] firbunny: probably not
[9:21 PM] froyo: You could have the item the bunnygirl seeks be more of an urban legend
[9:21 PM] firbunny: it is going to be
[9:21 PM] dawnwings: Yup
[9:21 PM] firbunny: probably
[9:21 PM] dawnwings: which would make sense
[9:21 PM] firbunny: yes :3
[9:22 PM] froyo: Maybe it starts off as something her friends talk about like at a sleepover
[9:22 PM] froyo: or at camp or something
[9:22 PM] froyo: That kind of story
[9:22 PM] firbunny: I just had a brilliant idea
[9:22 PM] froyo: And the bunnygirl can set out looking for it
[9:22 PM] dawnwings: Yeah?
[9:22 PM] firbunny: ok
[9:23 PM] dawnwings: I like the idea that everyone knows about it, but dismisses it, because there is something
[9:23 PM] firbunny: basically I think I'm going to have the bunny girl be like a future historyian
[9:23 PM] dawnwings: about being part of the minority that makes it work
[9:23 PM] firbunny: so she wants to know more about her own backyard
[9:23 PM] firbunny: and goes to the library to find out more
[9:23 PM] firbunny: among her piles of books
[9:23 PM] firbunny: there is a book about this urban legend
[9:23 PM] firbunny: and it has all these clues and hint sof how to get it
[9:24 PM] firbunny: and she goes out to pursue them
[9:24 PM] firbunny: the fact that she's getting to all of them and such makes it seem like it's real
[9:24 PM] dawnwings: What time period are you setting it in fir/
[9:24 PM] firbunny: when in fact it's a rich author who was bored and decided to set up a game off of this
[9:24 PM] firbunny: urban legend
[9:24 PM] firbunny: current
[9:24 PM] dawnwings: Why not look it up on the internet?
[9:25 PM] firbunny: actually
[9:25 PM] froyo: And fircoal, that's definitely a start
[9:25 PM] firbunny: there's a godo reason for that from my experience
[9:25 PM] firbunny: In the town I live in
[9:25 PM] firbunny: when I went to the town library
[9:25 PM] firbunny: there are some books with history about it
[9:25 PM] firbunny: that are not online
[9:25 PM] firbunny: nor have I found the info online
[9:26 PM] firbunny: they're old books
[9:26 PM] firbunny: from like 1984
[9:26 PM] firbunny: and stuff
[9:26 PM] firbunny: so
[9:26 PM] firbunny: for her search
[9:26 PM] firbunny: some stuff witll be online
[9:26 PM] froyo: Hey, I was alive in 1984!
[9:26 PM] dawnwings: There is a lot on the academic ones though
[9:26 PM] firbunny: but not everything
[9:26 PM] dawnwings: and that's only available through certain routes
[9:26 PM] froyo: But yeah local history is going to be best found in the local libraries and schools
[9:26 PM] dawnwings: like being a uni student
[9:26 PM] firbunny: she's a high schooler. No funds
[9:26 PM] firbunny: exactly
[9:26 PM] firbunny: and what she wants
[9:26 PM] firbunny: is local history
[9:26 PM] dawnwings: Okay, that can work
[9:26 PM] froyo: History professor at the college I go to was researching this town that apparently
[9:27 PM] froyo: there are zero records of ever existing
[9:27 PM] froyo: but it was there and people lived there
[9:27 PM] dawnwings: What about the local historical association?
[9:27 PM] firbunny: lol
[9:27 PM] firbunny: how fun
[9:27 PM] dawnwings: That's awesome fro!
[9:27 PM] firbunny: ooh sounds like another good idea
[9:27 PM] firbunny: but maybe she doesn't know about it
[9:27 PM] firbunny: or maybe
[9:27 PM] froyo: But yeah she can check out all of these things during the book
[9:27 PM] froyo: To try and find info on it
[9:27 PM] firbunny: the author is part of it
[9:27 PM] firbunny: and leads her down the path
[9:27 PM] froyo: With her friends so you have a way to keep the scene moving via dialogue and stuff
[9:27 PM] firbunny: well the thing is
[9:28 PM] firbunny: what's going to happen
[9:28 PM] firbunny: is she's going to leak info somehow
[9:28 PM] firbunny: and the other girls
[9:28 PM] firbunny: (who are not her firneds)
[9:28 PM] firbunny: are going to get interested
[9:28 PM] firbunny: and all try for it for their own reasons
[9:28 PM] firbunny: she only starts off with one friend who is a normal male
[9:28 PM] firbunny: who is very effermine
[9:28 PM] firbunny: and will be paired up with every minor male character that shows up
[9:28 PM] dawnwings: Sounds a lot like an anime lol
[9:29 PM] firbunny: EXACTLY Very Happy
[9:29 PM] firbunny: It's actually based off of hideyoshi from baka and test
[9:29 PM] firbunny: I love that gag
[9:29 PM] firbunny: so I'm doing my own
[9:29 PM] firbunny: except rather than everyone thinking he's a girl
[9:29 PM] firbunny: everyone thinks he's into guys
[9:29 PM] dawnwings: What part is the author going to play in the story do you think?
[9:29 PM] firbunny: and pairs him up
[9:29 PM] firbunny: to troll everyone
[9:30 PM] dawnwings: Okay, so what is the story about if it'[s not about the finding of this thing?
[9:31 PM] fircoal left the room.
[9:31 PM] froyo: Zany adventures? I guess it would need some kind of resolution though.
[9:31 PM] firbunny: it's about finding this thing
[9:31 PM] froyo: They could get back at the author for being a jerk
[9:32 PM] dawnwings: If it's about finding the thing, finding out the author is a jerk might be a bit unfulfill
[9:32 PM] dawnwings: ing
[9:32 PM] dawnwings: I like the zany adventure idea
[9:33 PM] firbunny: how does zany adventure work?
[9:33 PM] dawnwings: What if there really is something, and the author thought he made it up
[9:33 PM] firbunny: maybe
[9:33 PM] dawnwings: The story is actually about the friendships
[9:33 PM] firbunny: oh
[9:33 PM] firbunny: it might be zany adventure then
[9:33 PM] dawnwings: and the zany adventure is sort of secondary to the relationships of the characters
[9:33 PM] dawnwings: The resolution is more to do with the characters than the plot
[9:33 PM] firbunny: that problaby sounds more like it
[9:34 PM] firbunny: but I may want more of a plot mover
[9:34 PM] dawnwings: Like in Mei-chan, the resolution isn't her becoming a lady and inheriting the family fortu
[9:34 PM] firbunny: maybe someone ups the anti
[9:34 PM] dawnwings: ne and burying her parents together, it's about her and Rihito realising they're in forbid
[9:34 PM] dawnwings: den love and going with it.
[9:34 PM] dawnwings: That's fine, that happens all the time with zany adventures
[9:34 PM] firbunny: yea
[9:34 PM] firbunny: x3
[9:34 PM] dawnwings: but that's what makes them zany is the weird stuff
[9:35 PM] dawnwings: So, your story focus is on the characters
[9:35 PM] dawnwings: that is a much clearer part to start on Smile(
[9:35 PM] firbunny: probably
[9:35 PM] dawnwings: So, why does she want to be a historian?
[9:35 PM] firbunny: she's interested in the past and hwat came before it
[9:35 PM] dawnwings: Any particular reason?
[9:35 PM] firbunny: maybe she had a really cool grandmother who told her lots of old stories that got her excit
[9:35 PM] firbunny: ed and intesrted
[9:35 PM] dawnwings: I like history because it tells me about people
[9:36 PM] dawnwings: Love it Smile
[9:36 PM] dawnwings: So, her interest is a legacy from her grandmother
[9:36 PM] firbunny: yea
[9:36 PM] dawnwings: do her parents share the interest?
[9:36 PM] firbunny: no
[9:37 PM] dawnwings: how much do they not share it
[9:37 PM] firbunny: not sure
[9:37 PM] firbunny: enough so they have no curiousity of what she's doing
[9:37 PM] dawnwings: are they just not interested, or are they against it
[9:37 PM] firbunny: not interested
[9:37 PM] firbunny: not against
[9:38 PM] dawnwings: Okay, do they think she should be doing something else with her time
[9:38 PM] dawnwings: or are they okay with it as long as she's done her hw
[9:38 PM] firbunny: they're ok with it as long as she's done with her hw
[9:38 PM] dawnwings: cool Smile
[9:38 PM] dawnwings: what about her friends/
[9:38 PM] firbunny: she has only one friend
[9:38 PM] firbunny: the effiminete guy
[9:39 PM] firbunny: who isn't very interested but admires her passion
[9:39 PM] dawnwings: what kind of friend is he?
[9:39 PM] firbunny: best friend
[9:39 PM] firbunny: very loyal and willing to give it his all
[9:39 PM] firbunny: like he'll stand by her
[9:39 PM] firbunny: and just do anything
[9:39 PM] dawnwings: not interested in her sexually?
[9:39 PM] firbunny: he might be
[9:39 PM] firbunny: but that's a secret ;3
[9:40 PM] firbunny: I forgot about though
[9:40 PM] firbunny: cause I forgot even though he's gonna have a million yaoi pairings he's not gay x3
[9:40 PM] dawnwings: I can't help properly if I don't know
[9:40 PM] firbunny: yes he is x3
[9:40 PM] dawnwings: Okay
[9:40 PM] dawnwings: so is he doing this hoping she'll notice him?
[9:40 PM] firbunny: no
[9:41 PM] firbunny: he's doing this because he feels it's what a good friend would do
[9:41 PM] firbunny: he's more the quiet type about his feelings
[9:41 PM] dawnwings: So, he likes her as more than a friend, but isn't going to do anything about it?
[9:41 PM] firbunny: I think his plan is more
[9:41 PM] firbunny: be a good friend, and if she ever feels what you do, then start something up
[9:42 PM] firbunny: but don't push her into it
[9:42 PM] firbunny: let her decide
[9:42 PM] firbunny: he's the type of guy
[9:42 PM] firbunny: who won't want to lose her but will let her be with other guys
[9:42 PM] dawnwings: Are you going to have another guy who is more open about what he wants?
[9:42 PM] firbunny: and give his support
[9:42 PM] firbunny: maybe
[9:42 PM] firbunny: but I don't wanna give her a harem
[9:42 PM] dawnwings: it would up the stakes and have conflict
[9:42 PM] firbunny: that'll be for some more popular girl
[9:43 PM] dawnwings: Dude, two guys liking someone is not a harem, it's a love triangle, very common in manga
[9:43 PM] firbunny: true
[9:43 PM] firbunny: I may
[9:43 PM] firbunny: I'll have to think about it
[9:43 PM] firbunny: I could give her incredibly despirte guy
[9:44 PM] dawnwings: no, you need to make him actually appealing or he's not a threat
[9:44 PM] firbunny: drat
[9:44 PM] firbunny: oh better
[9:44 PM] firbunny: I'll have incredibly desprite guy for the best friend
[9:44 PM] firbunny: and she'll be like
[9:44 PM] firbunny: he's nice you should really go out with him
[9:44 PM] dawnwings: if he's interested in history too, that would even better
[9:44 PM] dawnwings: does she know he's straight?
[9:44 PM] firbunny: Friend: ARe you kidding me? > >
[9:44 PM] firbunny: no
[9:45 PM] firbunny: he'll ay it
[9:45 PM] firbunny: but she won't bleieve it
[9:45 PM] dawnwings: interesting
[9:45 PM] dawnwings: That could really throw the plot into interesting directions
[9:45 PM] firbunny: yea x3
[9:46 PM] firbunny: I got any idea
[9:46 PM] firbunny: the second guy could be a set up from another one of the girls
[9:46 PM] dawnwings: and then actually like the girl?
[9:46 PM] dawnwings: because that plotline is awesome Smile
[9:46 PM] firbunny: don't know about that
[9:46 PM] dawnwings: Why not?
[9:46 PM] firbunny: or maybe
[9:46 PM] dawnwings: Up the stakes!
[9:46 PM] firbunny: he could actually like the girl
[9:47 PM] firbunny: but then realize
[9:47 PM] firbunny: that he's more attracted to the friend
[9:47 PM] firbunny: yes the friend is going to get a harem
[9:47 PM] firbunny: he'll get female attraction too
[9:47 PM] firbunny: don't worry
[9:47 PM] firbunny: but he's too loyal
[9:48 PM] dawnwings: I'm not fussed about the friend at this point, he's not the main character
[9:48 PM] dawnwings: I tend to plot with the mc first
[9:48 PM] dawnwings: and then see what the secondaries do
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Re: CampNano August Plotting

Post  yip9 on Fri Jul 20, 2012 8:47 am

Nano's coming again, eh? I never did get to read The Cat's Powers 2. Your plot sounds interesting. It saddens me to read that there's no real wish-granting treasure, only the annoyance of a rich author. I'm surprised you're muttering about Baka and Test now. The thing's a little old, but not as old as Ruby/Sapphire, I think.
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